Film Review - Second Draft Feedback & Analysis

The picture shows the handwritten feedback from a selected group. The information consist of their ages and their feedback from the second draft review. This could either positives & negatives or just what to add to suit the empire magazine better.

They are all familiar with the Empire magazine, if not they was available to see one in person whilst writing feedback for my review.

From their responses, I can summarise a lot of adjustments are needed to further be taken.

Firstly, we will keep the text the same. This is the size, style, font, colour etc.

Then what is needed to be added is;

• Picture.
•  a caption is also needed to support this.
• Empire's logo.
• Border.
• same colour used in Empire magazine.
• Date, at the bottom of the page.
• Page number.
• Top & Bottom.
• Both in Empire style, top having line vertically beside it.

This feedback has allowed further adjustments to improve my review. Hopefully with this, my product will be the best it can be and will emblematize the conventions of Empire's magazine reviews.

A third review will now be created, which further feedback will be gathered to finalise the review.

Further posts will show the third draft of the review.